Really enjoyed reading this. I haven't seen the film, but I liked the film-like movement from scene to scene, the very factual telling of events.

Truly, Sam meeting Rachel at the bridge had me tearing up. I love the idea of the boys meeting up in dreams - I'd like to poke you into writing more of it :)

The overall atmosphere was quite dark, too. I'd have liked a little more fleshed out Jessica, personally...whereas John and Dean both being possessed and trying to kill each other made me shiver: powerful. I'm thankful that you left Dean mostly with very little memory of it, and that Sam didn't dig it up. Too painful for me, can't even imagine it for Dean!

Thank you. I hope you'll feel inspired to write more in this 'verse, it's very interesting.