Well, now I finished reading your story and notes, and WOW! Once I begun, I just couldn't stop! And I really, really enjoyed the ride. I love your Jessica. I love how you portrait her relationship with Sam, how we can go with her view of what's going on. I could see everything: the people, the house, the storm (I'm so with Jessica about storms over sea!). Another thing I enjoyed was Jessica's draws as a way to see some of the characters *smiles* And, BTW, I totally missed Brady not going into the room until Dean's talking with John. Only then I went: Now, wait a minute!!! And I also really like Dean's chat with Jessica, how he tried to make her understand why Sam acted the way he did, even as I also understood Jessica reluctance to forgive Sam lies. And I'm fond of this Jessica, too *g* So, in short, I love this. It has been a while since I was able to miss myself into a story for as many hours as I did today, so thank you for that gift!
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Once I begun, I just couldn't stop! And I really, really enjoyed the ride. I love your Jessica. I love how you portrait her relationship with Sam, how we can go with her view of what's going on. I could see everything: the people, the house, the storm (I'm so with Jessica about storms over sea!).
Another thing I enjoyed was Jessica's draws as a way to see some of the characters *smiles*
And, BTW, I totally missed Brady not going into the room until Dean's talking with John. Only then I went: Now, wait a minute!!!
And I also really like Dean's chat with Jessica, how he tried to make her understand why Sam acted the way he did, even as I also understood Jessica reluctance to forgive Sam lies.
And I'm fond of this Jessica, too *g*
So, in short, I love this. It has been a while since I was able to miss myself into a story for as many hours as I did today, so thank you for that gift!