briarwood: Supernatural - Jessica Moore (SPN Jessica)
Morgan Briarwood ([personal profile] briarwood) wrote 2010-09-13 03:18 pm (UTC)

And, BTW, I totally missed Brady not going into the room until Dean's talking with John. Only then I went: Now, wait a minute!!!

You have no idea how happy that makes me. Seriously - that's exactly why I didn't draw (Jessica's) attention the salt line until they're coming home. I figured it's fair for her to not notice it during the night: she's kinda distracted. I was hoping that the reader wouldn't realise until later that Brady couldn't get in.

And I also really like Dean's chat with Jessica, how he tried to make her understand why Sam acted the way he did, even as I also understood Jessica reluctance to forgive Sam lies.

I think it seems out of character for Dean now, but back in season one it's the kind of thing he would have done.

From a fannish perspective, I think Jess's anger with Sam seems unreasonable, but that's because we understand him, we know why he's so secretive. Jess doesn't (not yet, at least) and she feels betrayed. He did lie. She's got a right to be mad at him for that.

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D

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