ext_16530 ([identity profile] ongiara.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] briarwood 2007-01-29 05:11 pm (UTC)

Love the drive of this and the fact that to both John and Dean it's Sammy, period. I like how you portrait there family, how Sam struggled to call his dad at the beginning and how easily they're back to old times right away. They might disagree on some things but they're still family and this was knotted in nicely. I especially loved the last part, the interaction of the boys after two years. It worked very well for me.

Too bad that Sam can't seem to escape a hunter's life after all :) Can't wait to see where you're taking this.

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