First of all, story matching icon, yay!

I like how true to the characters your Sam and Dean are, there's just the right amount of poking, angsting and prodding from Dean's side about Sam's attitude towards (him,) their dad, hunting, school and girls. And you effortlessly weave it into the outer plot, which, by the way, gets more and more creepy and interesting. Can't wait to see what Dean knows about what's going on.

Great job!